The music fits well with the editing and there is a good use of shot types throughout. There are some parts where the background and music overpower the characters voices. Apart from that its entertaining :):)
The music is good and fits the feel of the the trailer but sometimes I can't hear the dialog clearly. The camera shots are good and the framing is correct
Good but music should be a major key at the start as characters are happy, with a bit of dissonance to show that equilibrium is going to be disturbed. Can't hear some of the dialogue. Need to show the conversation in the cafe- don't understand how Stephen finds out Beth is pregnant. You've managed to make it feel genuinely tense at the end, well done! :)
The music fits well with the editing and there is a good use of shot types throughout. There are some parts where the background and music overpower the characters voices. Apart from that its entertaining :):)
ReplyDeleteBackground noise in some scenes is too loud for the dialogue of the scene.
ReplyDeleteThe music is good and fits the feel of the the trailer but sometimes I can't hear the dialog clearly. The camera shots are good and the framing is correct
ReplyDeleteGood but music should be a major key at the start as characters are happy, with a bit of dissonance to show that equilibrium is going to be disturbed. Can't hear some of the dialogue. Need to show the conversation in the cafe- don't understand how Stephen finds out Beth is pregnant.
ReplyDeleteYou've managed to make it feel genuinely tense at the end, well done! :)