Friday, 23 November 2012

Second Draft

10 comments:

  1. This is dead good (y) But make the characters voices louder over the music, also I would suggest GIVING IT A NAME instead of 'Name'. And If u want put an E4 thingy in. xo

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  2. this is really good!
    just make sure the backing music doesn't drown out the dialogue to much

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  3. The music fits in really well with the trailer you just need to make sure the characters voices are louder so we can here them more clearly. I like the edits and camera angles they help tell the story very well

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  4. Order is great and music works well but sometimes is abit too loud for character dialogue.

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  5. This is very good but just make sure that teh characters voices can be heard clearly over the soundtrack and add a title

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  6. good variety of shots and soundtrack works well and doesnt disrupt the dialogue although the dialogue could be louder. Also a good use of steady and handheld shots to add to the tension.

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  7. This is a really good trailer, the soundtrack used helps create suspense and links to the storylines used. The edits make the trailer look professional and the audience is left wanting to watch more. In some scenes make the dialogue louder over the music so it is clearer to the audience

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  8. the transitions work well and the music fits in very well with the story just make sure it doesn't drown out the characters voices.

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  9. The order and soundtrack tell the story really well and create a lot of suspense. There is also a really good variety of shot types. Although, the soundtrack does appear to be heard over the dialougue at some points so making the dialogue louder would help make everything clearer to the audience, leaving them wanting more.

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  10. really good story line thats easy to follow, dialogue is hard to hear at time so make music quiter in the background! music helps create tension and makes audience want to watch the show as it is intriguing!

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